To see the previous installments, click on the following links: #1, #2
It is mid-afternoon and Rodrigo is kneeling on a small straw mat that insulates him from the cold of the stone floor. In front of him is a worn wooden board that serves as a desk, where he rests a sheet of washi paper (和紙) and a small black ceramic inkwell filled with sumi, the Japanese black ink. These are the luxuries bestowed on him for belonging to the lineage of Date Masamune.
And so, with slow, ceremonious movements, he takes a small piece of solid ink, rubs it on the stone surface, mixes it with a few drops of water to form a dense, dark substance and, little by little, the scent of the vegetable oils it contains permeates the atmosphere of his cell.
Holding the brush and the washi sheet, he begins to draw the first strokes of the kanji characters that, forming words, summarise the key moments of his journey. At times, the brush pauses in mid-air as Rodrigo searches his memory for the appropriate words that best describe the journey that took him from Coria del Río to Japan.
From time to time, he stops and looks at his pictograms. The still-wet ink reflects the afternoon light. Rodrigo puts the brush aside and lifts the paper carefully. Holding it in his hands, he feels that each word he has drawn is a struggle against oblivion.
The echo of footsteps in the corridor interrupts his concentration. He knows that the jailer will soon arrive to collect the writing implements and bring him the last meal of the day.
To be continued
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Japanese writing utensils. Source: Internet
Very good. No errors have leapt out at me at all. :)
I like how he spends his day in a prison. Calligraphy is similar as meditation and makes us calm. I like calligraphy too.
Thank you very much for your help, @Sprouts
Yes, @yumiyumayume , I have read it several times. Now, I have the problem of how long it takes a person to learn the rudiments of Kanji writing.
Haha, good luck!
I am told by gossips, Yumi, that after several years, Rodrigo may have knowledge of 1,000 of the most common Kanji. The most common ones and that these are enough to handle everyday texts and practice calligraphy (shodō)...
日 (Sun, day) 山 (Mountain) 川 (River) 人 (Person)
That's true. When you memorize 1000 kanji, you can survive in Japan! You're on the right track! Keep it up! I wish I could handle Spanish like you.......
QUESTION: What precisely crime has Rodrigo been charged with? If he was charged with the being a Christian, then wouldn't the jailers want to know whether he prayed or not? (So he does not seem like a fanatic Christian.)
Soon, @T-Newfields , the character will be prosecuted for practicing Christianity and for being an atonement for the Uesugi Clan. He was denounced by an anonymous person.
What is an atonement?
I was wrong, @Sprouts . He is accused of espionage. The term "atonement" is not appropriate.
Interesting. The Tokugawa shogunate was very suspicious of Spain at that time. The way that the Philippines became a Spanish colony made many Japanese uneasy. This might be a good television drama! (I am thinking the "Shogun" was very popular, and a drama about Rodrigo might work well.)
I notice that in the first two installments you use a first person narrator and then switch to a third person narrator in the third installment. Will you be switching points of view throughout your story?
Yes, @SEQ77 , I'm not an expert in writing techniques but I understand that the first person narrative style gives a touch of subjectivity and emotional connection with the reader; whereas in third person the narrator has the global perspective and knows everything: what all the characters feel, think and do.
I make these changes in narrative style without realising it, letting myself be carried along by the plot and the characters who, at a certain point, begin to take on a life of their own.
Neither am I. In case you don't already have a resource, here's an article about how to use POV and its pros and cons.
https://thewritepractice.com/point-of-view-guide/
Very interesting, @SEQ77. Thank you