My school is on a island. So when I go to school, I must take the ferry as well as the bus. Do you think it’s fun? I think it’s interesting to take a ferry to school.
One day, I was on the ferry. The sun was coming up. The sky was pink and blue. My classmate told me it’s “Daybreak color ”. It was so beautiful that I felt it was paradise!
It was the most beautiful daybreak I have ever seen. I wished I could see it again in the future.
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This is great, you are doing well. 🙂 The time of day when the sun comes up can also be called “dawn” or “sunrise” well as “daybreak”.
Very nice! All of those past tenses together are perfect.