Hello, my name is Zahra, and I met you here a few minutes ago. So it means I am new here.
First, my goal in being here is to write and think in English. And then I like to talk about my favorite things with new friends. So I will be very happy if you give me feedback :)
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Welcome to Journaly! By way of feedback, I can say that you're mastering the basics of English very well. I recommend you start to use contractions like I'm, you're, I'd, etc. because they make your English sound more natural. Other than that, study the corrections, edit your entire post, and enjoy the process on here! Also, it'd be helpful to know your native language in your profile.
Oops again: you're
Thank you, Shirley!
Uly (@CocoPop) I really appreciate your feedback. It's help me to become familiar with writing