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I wrote this post below about my mother. Have you got the impression that she died?
Thankfully, she's alive. I just meant I lost her due to dementia.
Do you think the title is confusing and I should edit it? Or is it better to add some information that clarifies that my mother is alive?
Thank you!
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Personally, the title made sense when reading the story and it was clear enough that it referred to the disease and not literal death. However, the last paragraph I felt implied that she died later on. The phrases "For over four months, I took care of my mother." and "Those months destroyed the little bit of what was holding me sanely from breaking down mentally and emotionally. Looking back at the circumstances I’ve been through" made me think that she died after these months and the past tense of the text also added to it. So, if that isn't how you wanted it to come off then maybe a phrase or hint that she's still alive and well could help. Good read though, prayers for your mom.
Thank you so much! I appreciate it! :)
Both people whom I know their moms had suffered from Alzheimer's described their moms like they've lost their moms for years, so I totally understand.
Thank you!
I'm so sorry! I thought for sure that your mother had passed away. How embarassing!
However, I agree with Horizon. Some of what you said made it seem like your mother had died. Using the past tense implies that things have changed over time and are different now. My obvious conclusion was that she had passed away.
I wish peace for you both.
Hey Simone, I got it from your other comment. There's no embarrassment at all. It was my fault I didn't make it clear. I added a sentence to the post on Substack.
Thanks for your sincere comments!
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