English
I suddenly have a bad feeling about this place. There should be more signs of life here. I'll keep my eyes peeled, in case I'm missing something. There's too much stillness, even for winter. Something is definitely amiss. It's not just a hunch —I didn’t have this feeling when I first came here. It’s coldly beautiful. It feels soulless — dead. I don’t know how to explain it: the river flows, the trees thrive, but the silence is deep and unsettling. Besides, there's an acrid smell I can't quite place. If this keeps up, I’ll have to move elsewhere. I still have a few days left before the winter wind lashes hard. I should hurry. Nature doesn’t wait.
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This sparks my curiosity. What place is it? I am trying to visualize the place. (Some readers might not might the connection between "this place = my home" . . . on the second reading, I made that connection.)
It's about a bear in a forest. But you'd have to read from chapter one to understand the story. Thanks for pointing that out.