Hi everyone. This is Maria, from the bottom of my heart, thank you so much for correcting me and give me some feedback, that helps me a lot and encourage me to keep on writing.
So for today's topic I decided to talk about the power of music, I'm a big fan of listening to music, that brings me joy and peace, however, I want to enphize in a thing: music change your animical state, and that freak me out (in a good way), I'm amuzed to feel how in a moment change from feeling enthusiasm and feel like dancing with "no digas lo siento" to feel peace and calm with " Háblate de Mí", it's just incredible.
I usually go to the with with my headphones. Here in Colombia most of the gyms reproduce music, nevertheless I enjoy more my training session with my own music, which takes me to the second point. Not every single song will make you feel something, I think we develop certain relationship with specific songs and singers and that's even more magic. A relationships generally need to be feed from both sides and it's rare to keep them alive as time passes, even though, music has been with me plenty of time through thick and thin.
It's incredible how an stranger singing can make you feel confort or disconfort, joy or sadness and how music is able to unite or separate. It's just powerful, and I'm thankfull with whoever invented music and with every music creator who puts his/her heart inside the lyrics and share them with us :)
You motivated me to come back to working out!♡
*go back to working out/the gym
You picked a very good subject and developed it beautifully. There's a lot to learn in this post, so let me know if you have any questions. Great work!))
Thanks so much for the both of you, I appriciate your time and feedback given :).
@Emaaa2001 Don't hesitate, go back to working out :) <3
@CocoPop Thank you so much for your kind words, I appreciate it, It makes me feel joy :). on another note, I do have a question, If you don't mind I would like to ask you about this: " I'm thankfull WITH whoever invented music and WITH every music creator" when goes WITH and when TO? Is there maybe a rule ?
and with this one: "enthusiasm and feel like dancing" why feeling instead of feel?
In advance, thank you for explaining to me, that helps me a lot with my processes of learning this awesome language :)
My pleasure))
You're always thankful to someone for something.
As for feeling, that's going to be harder to explain because the second paragraph of this post is one long sentence. But in short, you said that in one moment, you can go from feeling enthusiastic and [go from] feeling like dancing and feeling peaceful and calm.
I think this post is going to need more than one edit. You should implement all the corrections and let me do another reading and another round of edits to refine it.
Great work @Mariale ! Even with some minor errors present, you communicated your message beautifully. Music makes such a huge difference in our lives, it really is incredible!
@CocoPop Yes Sir, thank you. I already re-wrote the text with the corrections given, so if you don't mind, it's ready for you to check :)
@Carlita Thankful for your kind words and feedback <3
@Mariale: I still see the old post. You say you implemented the corrections?
@CocoPop Yeah, I just made a new one with the corrections, let me send you the link.
https://journaly.com/post/41518
You know, you can just edit this one and make corrections, right?