Hi everyone, these are the corrections from my previous writing text. Thank you to all of you for your kind words and feedback.

Hi everyone, this is Maria. From the bottom of my heart, thank you so much for correcting me and give me some feedback. It helps me a lot and encourages me to keep on writing.

So for today's topic, I decided to talk about the power of music. I'm a big fan of listening to music, it brings me joy and peace. However, I want to emphasize something: music changes your emotional state, and I find that incredible. it amuses me to see how in one moment  I can go from feeling enthusiasm and feel like dancing to "no digas lo siento" to feeling peace and calm with " Háblate de Mí", it's just incredible.

I usually go to the gym with with my headphones on. Here in Colombia most gyms play music, but I enjoy my work outs more with my own music, which brings me to my second point: not every single song will make you feel something. I think we´ve developed a certain relationship with specific songs and singers and that's even more magical. Relationships generally need to be nurtured from both sides, it's rare to keep them alive as time goes by, even though music has been for a long time through thick and thin.

It's incredible how a stranger singing can make you feel comfort or discomfort, joy or sadness and how music is able to unite or divided, it's just powerful, and I'm thankful to whoever invented music and to every music creator who puts their heart into  the lyrics and shares them with us :)