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The murmurs of the servants had become distant whispers, like the echo of an ancient tragedy, one that none of them wished to fully comprehend. At the back of the peristyle, on the threshold of a barely ajar door, a muffled cry had been the only thing to interrupt the ominous stillness.
The arrival of the Duoviri was imminent. They, whose duty it was to uncover the truth, would find the stage set, but uncertainty and fear still lingered. Marcus Varius, imposing as ever, but with a face carved by worry, held his bearing with the firmness the situation demanded, hoping that his honour and that of his family would be cleared of suspicion.
The scene, though still, vibrated with a palpable tension, as if the very walls of the peristyle whispered secrets as yet unrevealed. The body lay inert on the floor, but there was something strange about it, a detail that began to intrigue the few who had dared to look closely. His hand, stained with blood, seemed to have been dragged along the ground, drawing irregular lines on the garden tiles. They were not just random smudges; there was intent in those trembling movements....
To be continued
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Image of the peristyle of the Vettii house in Pompeii. Source: Wikipedia
Nothing to correct! 🤩 Just one comment. I would have used emdashes here: hoping that his honour — and that of his family — would be cleared of suspicion because I feel that you're emphasizing that his family's honor was more important to him than his own. I may be wrong. Great job!
Yes, Uly ( @CocoPop ), you are quite right. The character of Marcus Varius is very concerned about his family's honour. He was a slave who gained his freedom by being the personal assistant of Titus, the son of Vespasian, during the Judean Wars. The Judean Wars were from 66 to 73 AD.
From this close relationship with a member of the imperial family, Marcus increased his chances of a quick and honourable manumission, rapid prestige and important connections. His former relationship with Titus benefited him even in civil life, where he was able to become a 'garum' merchant and a prominent citizen.
'Garum' was a fish sauce made from the fermented offal of fish and various spices and used as a condiment for lunches and dinners.
Thank you very much.
How interesting! Garum sounds like a precursor of Worchestershire sauce.
Yes, it is possible, Uly. In ancient Rome and in Italica, located in Baetica (now Andalusia, Spain), there was a large production of garum, the famous fish sauce that was highly appreciated throughout the Roman Empire.
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Well written! An excellent job, Druida!
Thank you, Tim