I had a lot of classes and homework on my May Day holiday . But I had a bit of free time. So I went to Wan Xiang shopping mall. There was a restaurant selling barbecue pork. It was delicious. I liked it . I think I had a great holiday.
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That nice
Glad you had a good time :)
This is great! Next time, try to add some time words. For example: One afternoon, I went to... First I did my homework, then later... Time words help the reader understand the story.