I had a very nice holiday! I loved the holiday so much! No school and no lessons(But a lot of homework). However, the holiday was very exciting. I did a lot of things. I ate really a lot of ice cream and I played game with my friends. I spent most of my time on games and my homework (HATE IT😡). But the games were fun. I played the Full guys. (I lost a lot). The holiday was happy.
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Ok, on my page there are 4 posts about the May Day, what is that? I only know today is May the 4th be with you.
I'm not sure what May Day is either but having a holiday is always nice! Glad you got to enjoy yours and best of luck with all the homework! :)
This is great. Next time, try adding some time words. For example: On the first day... The next day... One morning... Time words help the reader understand the story.