I slept horribly yesterday. I was tossing and turning all night. I had insomnia. I finally got into sleep at 5 in the morning and then I overslept. I missed my alarm. I slept through my alarm. On the way to work, the traffic was awful. I was sitting in a traffic for an hour. My car broke down. I had to wait for an hour for a tow truck and I was late to work. At work I had a huge argument with one of my coworkers. We have a big deadline coming up and we’re both under a lot of stress. I was working late and I spilled coffee all over some important papers. I had to stay really late to finish it. I couldn’t concentrate and I got frustrated.
On the way home, I missed the last train. When I got home, I couldn’t find my keys. I was locked out. I had to wake up my friend who lives with me. Finally I got into home and I found that my friend had eaten the leftovers and there was nothing to eat for dinner. It was too late to buy anything to eat. Finally, to cap it all, I dropped my phone down the toilet.
I hope this never happen to anyone in the world.
Hi Anne! Your day sounded really rough. I hope you had a good day after though! Your post looks great! I didnt comment on this, but the flow is a bit choppy and interrupted by the short sentences. Maybe you can combine sentences or use transitions. I hope this helps!
Hi Anne! You had a such terrible experience. Hope you’ll get the day off to a good start tomorrow:)
Hi Anne! I really hope the rest of your week has been better than that day!! 화이팅!