Your text is perfect, but I have a small suggestion. Actually, the word だらだら can be used not only for a person being lazy, but also when something written or said is too long or boring. So in this sentence, people might think the French book itself is boring. If you use the expression だらだら過ごす (to laze around), it will be easier to show that it's the person who is being lazy. The way you used あまりに is fine.
@Athlee Your Japanese is really well written. Sometimes people may change things that aren't actually mistakes, but please don't let it bother you and keep your confidence. I'm stepping away from helping learners on this site, but I'm wishing you the best. The people who make these unnecessary corrections usually mean well and are trying to help, so they don't have any bad intentions :)
@Athlee
14 days ago
@Una Thank you really much for your comments, they are really useful! Though it is a shame that you decided to step away from helping learners on this site, I wish you all the best. And no worries, I welcome all comments because I can learn from them :) Thanks for caring and take care!
Your text is perfect, but I have a small suggestion. Actually, the word だらだら can be used not only for a person being lazy, but also when something written or said is too long or boring. So in this sentence, people might think the French book itself is boring. If you use the expression だらだら過ごす (to laze around), it will be easier to show that it's the person who is being lazy. The way you used あまりに is fine.
先々週図書館でフランス語学習の本を借りましたが、あまりにだらだら過ごしてて、この本をまだ読んでません。
Some people might prefer to write 過ごしていて. My use of してて is casual for text like this.
また、私風になおしてみました。どれが、正解というのは、ないので、私風も参考にどうぞ～。フランス語も日本語も勉強されてらっしゃるのですね。すごいです。
@Athlee Your Japanese is really well written. Sometimes people may change things that aren't actually mistakes, but please don't let it bother you and keep your confidence. I'm stepping away from helping learners on this site, but I'm wishing you the best. The people who make these unnecessary corrections usually mean well and are trying to help, so they don't have any bad intentions :)
@Una Thank you really much for your comments, they are really useful! Though it is a shame that you decided to step away from helping learners on this site, I wish you all the best. And no worries, I welcome all comments because I can learn from them :) Thanks for caring and take care!
@yumiyumayume コメントありがとうございます。フランス語の勉強を頑張って再開しなきゃいけないですね。