Students having jobs to pay for their university studies are made less dependent on taking out a loan. By earning money, they can help ease their family’s burden of constant support. However, concentrating on working a job can keep students from studying. Juggling between studying and working significantly depletes students’ energy resources. I approve of students getting jobs, but only to the extent it doesn’t prevent them achieving progress at university.
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Well done. I just gave some small suggestions.
title: Should College Students Work?
Thank you :)