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Report

Introduction

This report is intended to suggest ways in which the museum can attract more visitors. This involved visiting students of university of design who represent themselves a curious students passionate about art. My findings are presented below.

Ideas of the exhibits on display

As we are planning to have our next exhibition about Japonism in Europe, almost everyone said that we should display works of well-known impressionists comparing what they used to paint to their works influenced by the Japanese style. They believe it would be engrossing to look at prominent artists and how they were inspired by absolutely disparate culture.

Cost of tickets

Most people believe that the entrance fee is too high for students to attend the gallery frequently. The majority of students thought that providing a student discount to increase the number of visitors.

Souvenirs

Regarding the souvenir shop, several people thought it would be profitable to provide the shop with thematic items according to our ongoing exhibition. One example is affordable stationery with printed illustrations on it with the logo of the museum.

Conclusion

I would therefore suggest providing a student discount on tickets, displaying famous works and the history behind them, and adding inexpensive useful items like stationery.