On these days, I and my whole family had a magnificent but confounded trip.
we traveled along the Littoral zone boundary of China and saw various kinds of fascinating views.
I thought it is a proper approaches for me to make a meeting with my heart.
Also I can let my body full of knowledges.
It took us about ten days from Fujian to Guangdong to Guangxi to Guizhou To Yunnan,
and the extensive vast ocean and the spectacular and mighty mountains revolved around us all the time.
We visited some prosperous and luxuriously provincial capital.
The people in those cities were too crazy and crowded.
I wanna tell you some stories that happened on this travel.
Such as some splendid scenic spot.
If you are interested in it, you can describe me and see more!
I would appreciate it if you could give me some suggestions for my article. Bis Bald!
Hi @redknife,
There are a few things that come to mind reading your title:
--> My suggestion would be to change your title to: "A nice Travel among Mountains and the Sea (I)"
You also might want to change the language the text is written in to English.
Bitte=)
The scenery sounds like it was beautiful! :)