Part 2
"How my dream began"
Hey everybody! Today I'm going to be telling you about the part 2 of my history.
When I woke up at 10:30am the Europe atlas was over my chest, it was opened at the chapter 2: "Cities across Moldova River". When I saw that big name on the title, I had a strange feeling, It was as if I had seen all those images and all those words before, I felt in the core of my being an awesome "Déjà vu ". I looked up from the atlas and I saw my grandfather at the door, and then he to said -that's the cheaper way to travel around the world-. Then, I just put the book on the bed and I went with him to have breakfast.
When I was eating, I wasn't there, I was still traveling around the world. When my grandfather noticed that, he said to me -be careful, if you don't arrive to reality the frustration will come to you-. I was, all day, thinking about my grandfather's words, and that evening, when I was returning to my house, I thought about why I didn't ask him about Prague. I'd just readed the title and seen those beautiful pictures, but I was wanting more.
Three days before, when I was organizing my things, I took my backpack and I saw something strange. Inside the backpack was the Europe atlas with a bookmark on the page of Prague and also with a note.
The end of Part 2...
Note: I'm going to be posting the Part 3 at midnight
Your post is a pleasure to read. Your writing is actually very stylistic, (almost like poetry, but in prose). I hope you will keep this style of writing even as you learn English.
Thank you @Weijun! I try my best when I'm writing
Enjoyable to read. I agree with the above comment about your writing style so you might want to rewrite your grandfather's comment slightly different than my correction. I didn't highlight punctuation, but English (at least in the U.S.) puts periods & commas inside of quotation marks and doesn't use hyphens for dialogue. Good luck with juggling!
A really interesting story, I can't wait to read the rest!
@manakin Thanks for your comments and for your advices!
Awesome story, I really love it