Hii. I've no idea what to write about so I guess I'll just tell you about my day. So today I got up at 7 A.M, fed my pet dog and took it out for a thirty-minute walk. It's 8 A.M now and I'm dead tired since I couldn't get any sleep last night because I was waaay too excited about a new routine I made for myself. To be honest, I've been feeling kind of lazy lately and procrastinating a lot but I think if I can stick to this routine I just told you about I'll start feeling a lot better both mentally and physically so I'll just try my best to stick to it - even though it might be sort of demanding for what I'm used to- since I believe It's worth the try for all the benefits I might get from it. And yeah, that's it... Btw, I'll be updating next week, hopefully commiting to an update will work as extra motivation. Anyways, thanks for reading and I think it'd be nice to hear about your day too, so feel free to tell me about it. Take care, Tofi
Most of this sounds fluent, well done!
Very good! Good luck with your plan. I agree with the comment that you don't need to say "pet."
To the people who revised my text, thanks a lot for your corrections :) they were really helpful @JGComm, @DanielGallagher, @Palomalou