For me it's hard to keep one journal. I feel like I don't have enough level on my Englis, but I decided to try. Sometimes it's important to be bold and face ours weaknesses. Bye the way, it's my first time on this site, and if you can help me with any corrections I will be grateful. Thanks !!!
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Corrections: "By the way, it's my first time........"
For me it's hard to keep one journal. I feel like my level of English isn't high enough, but I decided to try. Sometimes it's important to be bold and face our weaknesses. By-the-way, it's my first time on this site, and if you can help me with any corrections I will be grateful. Thanks !!!
It looks all right to me. I've only changed it slightly. Though, I must admit, my grammar needs sorting out. LOL
Bravo! Great first post. Here are a few alternatives which sound more natural ....'to keep a journal'; instead of saying 'to face our weaknesses', a stronger verb to use could be 'to confront or to ignore our weaknesses, and simply start doing it!'. Lastly 'I would be grateful' sounds a tad more formal and elegant. But your text is perfectly clear in conveying what you want to say. Keep it up!
Thanks my friends for the corrections !