Hallo,I'm moon,I'm11 yeas old,I live in xiamen in china.
This week,we are reading a stroy about bats.
First,There's a team for animals,it has have wings animals ,walk animal in this team.
Then a bat came,it can't play,becos it is small.And the birds help.
It got a wings from birds ,it can fly!
It win the team!!!
I think that's a good story.
Bye~~I'm Moon~
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Good, Moon. First, remember to use punctuation (标点符号) right. And when you write a story, you use the past tense: "was," "could," "helped," "had."