In spite of being learning English since ten years ago (I think),to be fair not in a constant way, I only started to consume native content around year and I half ago, I'm still lacking competence at writing, the way I write is even messier than I the way I speak, I guess for being a good interlocutor is not compulsory to have access to the more elevated side of the english language and I'm not proud of it but I can carry myself without embarrassing me so much speaking quite well, it might be just because words fade away quicker. I'm done with complaining I wanna go one (or hundred) step further and finally bet up my fears, so, I'll try to improve my writing competence somehow, for now is enough to make the effort to actually write something with structure on daily basis instead of just imagining doing so.
Lo estás haciendo muy bien, amigo, ¡sigue aprendiendo! Veo que también estás aprendiendo chino, como yo. 加油。
You should be proud of your accomplishments so far. Speaking a new language without embarrassing yourself is a big achievement. Your proficiency shines through your writing. Best of luck, but I think it won’t take long for you to reach your goal.
It's definitely not embarrassing to make mistakes. Every mistake helps us to grow our skills even further! You should be so proud of your accomplishments! :)
Great work, but from what I can see, you're biggest problem is knowing when to stop a sentence. Too many commas. Other than that, good work!
Once you get it up; keep it up.... write everyday. I will be looking for it.