Some time ago I discovered the bullet journal method but it's really difficult for me to stick to it. Bujo(bullet journal) is about productivity and start and finish projects. I recommend you to check out this method.
I decided to start this method because my life needs dicipline. When I was starting a project or a new activity like play guitar or practise basketball I always dropped out. I have a lot of dreams and hopes, but how am I suppose to accomplish my hopes if I can't finish a small project. Self improvement is really hard but I think it's a fair price for change my life.
Oh and I discovered a videogame really beautiful it's stardew valley their characters has a lot of charisma and depth. Its color palette of every season is beautiful. My favorite character is Shane, he's a character with depression and that makes me connect with the character and with the game. Sometimes I spend a lot of hours playing it, it's really fun.
Great work! I just wanted to note that it is helpful for us to know if you are learning British or American English so that we can make appropriate recommendations because some of the "corrections" are more related to style and dialect than about "correctness".
Also, I would note that where @Boredomer changed commas to semi-colons is correct, but it is actually more common to end a sentence with a period and then start a new one than to use semi-colons so frequently, especially in an informal text like this.