It is clear that in some countries there are more younger people than elderly people which leads to some advantages and disadvantages. This essay wİll explain why I believe the positives are outweighed by its negatives.
On one hand, young people can make a more essential contribution towards their researches, workings and so on to their country.İn general young generations are more likely to be productive and creative due to their perspectives and willingness. compared with older people. They are usually at the beginning of their career and it pushes them up beneficially. To illustrate, the person who discovers a new treatment for cancer in turkey a newly graduated student. Moreover, the founders of Facebook and Tesla are very young people who did a remarkable huge contribution to modern society of the world and especially to their country in terms of economics.
On the other hand, having a higher population of young people means that government budget do not go to nursing homes and other elderly people care centers as a result of this government invest other important fields more easily such ah education and art.İt is obvious that these kind o areas may cause more beneficial result in comparison with nursing homes and so on.No need to say having well-qualified education facilities and art galleries enable people to gain new perspectives and create a new dşscoveries which is very good both country and society.
In conclusion, nowadays some countries have a high population of young people which brings several important and beneficial result compared with older peoples brings.
Cool essay! I'm not an expert on the theme, but maybe you could also try to talk about the disadvantages, to make the essay more complete. Just a suggestion :)
Thank you, you right it would be better to add some negatives =) is there any mistakes grammatically