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Ngo5 lai5-baai3-ji6 tung4 lai5-baai3-sei3 zou6-je5. Ngo5 lai5-baai3-jat1, lai5-baai3-saam1 tung4 lai5-baai3-ng5 zung1-ji3 hok6 Gwong2-dung1-waa2. Ngo5 lai5-baai3-luk6-jat6 m4-sai2 zou6-je5. Ngo5 hai2 Gaa1-zau1 daai6-hok6 Au1-man4 fan1-haau6 zou6-je5 tung4-maai4 duk6 dei6-zat1-hok6!
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我禮拜二同禮拜四做嘢。我禮拜一、禮拜三同禮拜五中意學廣東話。我禮拜六日唔使做嘢。我喺加州大學歐文分校(UC Irvine)做嘢同埋讀地質學！
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I don't really get the title "工作同學" . It means "work classmate" literally.
@Carla thank you so much for your wonderful feedback! My level is still quite low, so I don't necessarily understand yet why I should be making the changes that you suggest, particularly on this post, so I have written follow-up questions for where I am unsure. Hopefully my poor (for now) grammar didn't make reading this too confusing!