Yesterday was my birthday so my family went out for dinner. So now I'm forteen years old . The dinner was very nice . I had some soup and tofu for it. My cousins and my aunt came to . My grandparents came too. after dinner we lit the candles and turned the light off. the we song the birthday song and I blew out the candles and I wished I can get a good grade. the cake was nice too.
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Well done, suyixiang! My feedback is to help the flow of your sentences and give different suggestions. You didn't have many errors at all.