امشب، طولانی ترین و تاریک ترین شب سال رو جشن می گیریم - شب یلدا.
دوستان و خانواده با هم میوه های قرمز خوشمزه می خورند و شعر حافظ می خوانند.
انقلاب زمستانی در فرهنگهای مختلف جشن گرفته می شه ولی به نظرم ایرانیان زیباترین راه رو برای جشن گرفتن این شب دارند.
من هنوز درباره شب یلدا یاد می گیرم و امیدوارم سال بعد می تونم با دوستانم جشن بگیرم.
امسال چند شعر حافظ رو به تنهایی می خوانم. بالاخره می توانم آن کتاب حافظ رو که در شیراز خریدم بخوانم!
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I just can't get over how freaking cool it is seeing these posts in Persian and all the languages people are using ahhhhhh. Great job Candace!! 👏🏻
Nice text, but you mix formal and informal writing. For instance رو instead of را and میشه instead of میشود, which can be used in blogs so it's OK to use it, but the rest of your text is quite formal, e.g. میخوانند instead of میخونن and آن instead of اون.
Thanks @Day-With. Yeah, I'm actively working with my tutor to move from formal to informal, so perhaps I need to be more conscious with my intention of which formality before I start writing! Most of my Journals will be informal because my current study focus is to become more confident with friends and expressing myself in everyday language - regardless of speaking or writing (because I would like them to match, if that makes sense?). If blogging in informal is ok (inc social media), then I need to remind myself to only use informal, while knowing that formality has its time and place, too!
Sounds good! I have also focused mostly on informal writing (and speaking) since that's how I use the language. Good luck!
I love seeing these discussions, it's really interesting seeing all the comments about informal vs. formal speech in these different contexts!