I wrote about the game Holmes. So today, I want to write about a game between me and my cousins. The game started , I got "the game is afoot" and the villain called James Moriarty. I Palyed the game is afoot . Then it was my cousin's turn . He played a move card train. So we moved to the countryside. The another cousin played a card called "clue" so he can checked two cards from me. I'm very scared but he didn't caught my villain. Now is my turn again. I couldn't play any card so I has to take a card.
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Hi Suyixiang, I very much enjoyed reading this. Several of my comments are about style rather than about correct language. Your English seems to me to be more at an intermediate level.
I look forward to the next one.