I dreamed in this morning.
I talked with my friend who hadn't meet long time in the dream. After I woke up, I thought I would call him because his number left in my old cell phone.
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Hello! The meaning of your last sentence kind of miffs me, so I’m leaving a few suggestions here, hoping that one of them will be of help to you. If I haven’t gotten any of them right, please feel free to write back, and I’ll try to offer more options then! "After I woke up, I thought about possibly calling him — before realizing that I couldn’t because I never transferred his number from my old phone to my new one.” “When I woke up, I thought about calling him; remembering that I could still find his number on my old phone!"
Having written these sentences out, I do want to say that they’re a bit stiff to my own ears. I want to stay as accurate to what you were trying to write as possible, but I still think it’s important to note that what I wrote for the sake of creating clarity is more than a little mechanical sounding too.
To @CheesyWriter Thank you for your kindly reviews!
It’s my pleasure!