Yesterday morning, I went to bakery and bought some bread for breakfast.
There is a bakery near my house that is very popular in the neighborhood.
Even if you go around 7 a.m.,there's already a long line.
They have classic breads, but the menu changes every month, so my family and always look forward to trying the new items.
Going to the bakery is a special treat for weekends.
We warm the bread in the oven at home so it becomes crispy outside and soft inside, and then enjoy it with good coffee.
That kind of morning feels like a small luxury that only weekends can give.
Do you have any weekend-only pleasures too?
I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
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I’m putting this comment here because this is less of a correction and more of an observation, the sentence “There is a bakery near my house that is very popular in the neighborhood.” is kind of stiff. I understand what you want to say because it’s very clear, but it’s slightly repetitive and awkward. Something like, “There's a very popular bakery in my neighborhood.” Should suffice as a substitute, and you can add that it’s near your house in the previous sentence, like this, “Yesterday morning I want to a bakery that’s near my house.” Followed by “It’s (instead of “There’s”) a very popular bakery in my neighborhood.
This was really well done, good job! I enjoyed reading about you and your families weekend ritual, it sounds really nice and domestic. It’s great that you take that kind of time to wind down and relax. I wish I could have some kind of similar weekend routine, I mostly just study, or watch a movie, play a game etc.
@CheesyWriter Thank you so much. Your explanation helped me a lot. I couldn’t realize it just by myself, so I really appreciate your advice. Thank you again!
My pleasure! I’m happy to have helped out.