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In my garden
They are red currants.It s a perfect fruit. Its round and smooth shape and color ! When the sun shining it's like a jewel ! I like to watch the currants on the branch. It's like a pearl necklace . But i prefer to eat the yellow raspberries next to it. This fruit is sweeter. It's also more fragile and i am sensitive to this. Next to it , they are nice strawberries with little yellow stains on the dress ! In front of, they is beautiful bouquet of chives in bloom. Have you tester bloom chives in salad of tomatos ? It's delicious.it's like garlic. I like to go to the garden to weed.It's relaxing ! And you ? What do you think about ?
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For the title, each word should be capitalized "In My Garden". Also, next time, try to take a little extra time to fix some formatting issues. That'll help the reader a lot!
Lastly, sounds like you have a great garden! I also think weeding and tending to plants is quite relaxing.
Merci beaucoup pour les corrections et pour votre avis !
Right now, I have ripe grape tomatoes in my garden. They are delicious. I wish I enjoyed weeding, but I don't. It's a chore that I have to do so that I can find the delicious vegetables. :)