Hi, I just saw your writing! You're welcome! If you have any questions or you need any help, don't hesitate to ask me ;)

谢谢! Thanks for all the help - I'm trying to do these entries a few times a week to improve my mandarin. Any you do see is great and your help is useful, but don't worry too much - already given more than enough help and even uncorrected ones will be good practise for me. :)

and by the way (if you were wondering why the text isn't changed after your corrections) I've been noting down all these corrections separately, but leaving the original unedited so I can see my mistakes in future

Greatt! Yeah it is indeed helpful to save the original version to make a comparison with the corrections! Good luck~