I've traveled to many different cities in China but Beijing is the one which left the most lasting impression on me. I like Beijing because of the collision of modern life and historical remains it has. When you are walking on the street in Beijing, you can find both skyscrapers towering into the clouds and quadrangle courtyards that have been there for more than one hundred year; you can explore the high-tech park in the morning and visit the forbidden city in the afternoon. To me, Beijing is like a book which records the bits and pieces of history. I like Beijing a lot.

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